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Thursday, April 17, 2008



Essay sample


"Whatching the Soccer Game"



I ) Thesis / introducction: I love to play soccer, but more than loving playing it, i love and enjoy watching the game either when I`m with my family or friends, we always get together, and we fill the room with euphoria, happiness and just with that impatience that in any moment the game will start.




A) My favorite team is the Real Madrid. I think they are the best, even when they have had some loses, but is still the best team to me, everyone has their favorite right?




B) Last month one of my best friends invited me to the game, I was so happy but at the same time, I has thinking in not going because I dont like the wrote situation about people fighting at a game just because either the other team lost or someone made a bad comment, or just someone threw trash on someone else just because he wanted trouble. Those kinds of things make me uncomfortable and it loses my interest of enjoying and watching the game in a relaxed way.




C) That is the reason of why I enjoy watching the game at home with my family and friends, because in that way I won´t have to usten to all that noise around me of people arguing, and all I can hear is the game besides, what´s better than eating home made snacks, drinking a few beers with your friends and just relaxing while you´re watching the game.




II) Another thing; who likes watching the game in the stadium where you get awfull seats (specially the view) and on top of that the seats are incredibly uncomfortable. Well, I don´t all pushing around, and without even saying excuse me, or (I´m sorry). I bet that by the time you get to your seat after all that pushing, your enthusiasm will be depressing. Some people find it a bit fun to go through the whole - line waiting; sometimes under the sun, but in my case I prefer not going throug all that trouble.



III) In my conclusion, I prefer whatching the game at home where I can do anything in my way, where i can get up without oushing anyone, specially making someone uncomfortable and where I can eat anything I want without having to spend too much at the store.


I think it´s much better watching the game at your own place, and enjoying every moment of it without any interruptions.

That is why we have that famous saying " There´s no place like home".
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